tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6557073288918957762.post2808445156391837411..comments2023-06-09T20:26:29.798+05:30Comments on Scribbles: Love LostAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15009101176161709554noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6557073288918957762.post-34945522362156203152011-02-01T11:19:37.826+05:302011-02-01T11:19:37.826+05:30i am no expert to comment on ur writing or the way...i am no expert to comment on ur writing or the way u have written. but the first impression which i got was impressive/appropriate use of 'the words' - (for me, this shows your command over the language)- where i got lost and then found myself again.<br /><br />some of the lines/words r awesome :) i love 'ridiculous emotions'<br /><br />PoonamAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6557073288918957762.post-63493628969592070242011-02-01T07:23:16.578+05:302011-02-01T07:23:16.578+05:30I agree with Renuka - the 3 last paras feel the mo...I agree with Renuka - the 3 last paras feel the most powerful, they are naked and true, and very poignant. I loved the second para too because it felt very poignant also, the image (and its feelings) stood very clear in my mind and therefore very memorable to me. It's something I've continued thinking about.<br /><br />More than this, I love the way in which you set the scene, then cut Angéliquenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6557073288918957762.post-55543884457789594712011-01-29T18:01:22.862+05:302011-01-29T18:01:22.862+05:30honestly, i like the last 3 paras - straight from ...honestly, i like the last 3 paras - straight from the heart! the rest - a bit dis-connected. Its like u didnt really want to bare ur soul, so u begin cautiously, not giving away much, just an attempt at stringing some words together, but gradually- u become bolder, think people will perhaps not see too much, or maybe by then u dont care anyway, and then starts the poetry!Renukanoreply@blogger.com