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20 October 2011

Evening Song




When the sun was setting
between coconut leaves,
kites were going crazy while flying
right above the horizon
just below tinted clouds,
mynas and parrots were screaming
and singing on their way back home,
sweet monsoon breeze was mixing
fading sunlight with fluorescent
lights of the garden
and illuminating each evening walker,
I sat on the stairs of a medieval mausoleum
savoured the perfect moment
and celebrated the fraction of forever


5 comments:

  1. Nicely done. I felt like I was the watcher, the description was so vivid.

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  2. Quite refreshing lines, which a person can connect easily with one's life...!!

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  3. Well penned; lovely thoughts, words and emotions..

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  4. Thanks Gina. I like your poetry too

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